Samia, Kisayah, Maria and Benjamin - thank you for writing and sharing Boy Overboard! Your very descriptive writing gave me a sense of what it would have been like for the boy to suddenly be in the water and struggling. You then went on to create great suspense. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.Best wishes and keep practising your writingBarbara Kells
Thank you for your comment, we loved your comment. We will keep writing.
I like the strong descriptive languge ,it was very intense and grippingHarrison from Bayfield Primary .
Hi Harrison, we love that you enjoyed our piece of writing. Have a great day.
Thank you for your comment. We look forward to reading and responding to it. Kind regards, Room 10.